Blog Reflection

This is my first year that I've had a blog and it has been a really cool experience for me. I think doing assignments online is much more efficient than the traditional ways because we get to use our addiction to technology that some may think is harmful. We take advantage of these things to improve our schoolwork. For instance, typing online is a lot faster than writing in our notebooks. Writing online allow you to search any questions up, including tools like the dictionary. However, using technology to do homework may also be negative because we might find ourselves going on social websites instead of completing assignments. Also, some can also take advantage of writing online by saying things that might hurt others because they can't say it face to face. Being online creates a shield that keep you away from others and also be in touch. 

Keeping a blog has improved my literary skills in many great ways. It allows access to my peers' writing at my fingertips and helped me learn from them.

            The book, The Virgin Suicides is a group of mysterious boys recalling the year when all five Lisbon sisters who they have developed an obsession on committed suicide. The reason behind the suicides are unknown, and the community continue to search for an explanation for their tragic acts.The Lisbons sisters grew up in an extremely isolated environment with strict parents who limit their social activities. I think their parents may be the cause of their tragic acts, because they are "protecting" the girls from the outside world and rarely lets them leave the house. 

        

             When Cecilia attempted suicide the first time, she was found in time to be saved and survives the attempt. But when the doctor tells her she is too young to understand how bad life is, she says "Obviously, Doctor. You've never been a thirteen-year-old girl." I think that is a sign of Cecilia protesting to the world. She wants to bring attention to her and her sisters' situation and is attempting to change her parents. Of course, she sort of succeeded when her parents allow the girls to throw a party several weeks after Cecilia returned from the hospital. Mrs. Lisbon contributes a big part to Cecilia's attempted suicides because she wants to be in constant control over the girls' lives. The plan backfired when Cecilia attempted suicide again and succeeded. This shows Cecilia is done with life. 

The Secret life of Bees

In ' The Secret life of Bees' by Sue Monk Kidd, there are many issues circling around racism. The book is set in a time period where racism was one of the major societal issues. Two characters, Lily who's white and Rosaleen who's black running away from a place where races were separated by both laws and attitudes. Lily experiences racism in ways that made her learn about life and understands prejudice in a new way.

One way Lily understands racism is through the people around her. For example, a beekeeper named Zach who's black and wants to become a lawyer despite the barriers in his way. Lily falls in love with him but Zach reminds her of their difference and their relationship would be impossible in the present world. When Zach was unjustly imprisoned, Lily finds out the horror of racial prejudice. She learns even though Zach didn't do anything wrong, he is still blamed because of his skin color. The imprisonment changed Zach and makes him even more determined to become a lawyer to fight these things. Lily experiences what it is like to be judge based solely on her skin color when people criticize her for living with African Americans. Because it is the people shes living with that treats her better than her own race.

Another way Lily experiences racism is through religion. Lily comes across a picture of a black Mary and she was shocked because Jesus' mother has always been portrayed as a white lady. "I could read her though: If Jesus' mother is black, how come we only know about the white Mary?" The issue here is how religion is shown as being racist and how all religion portrays are revolved around white portrayals. Because that religion is always portrayed as white, people automatically relates anyone related to religion is white. 

In conclusion, there are many ways racism is portrayed in the story. The theme really fit well into the story because racism is one of the biggest problems at the time period. The story clearly depicts how a young white girl deals with the problem, especially when the people she cares about is black. 

Non-fiction Critical Analysis

In "Marriage for All?" by Patricia Smith, the author want to convince readers that same-sex marriage should be allowed because of the shifting opinions from the public. One thing the author does is by comparing statistics concerning same-sex marriage; for example, same sex was legal in only 17 states a year ago but now is legal in 36 states out of 50, and a 2014 Gallup poll showing 55 percent of Americans favor gay marriage.  She also include different perspectives from the public. TV shows like Ellen, Will & Grace, and Modern Family all feature gay couples. She also says even athletes like Jason Collins of the Brooklyn Nets and Michael Same announced to the public their sexual preference. Lastly, the author includes the opinion coming from a professional person from Harvard which provides more credibility. She says, " Harvard law professor Lawrence Tribe wonders if the justices might avoid deciding whether gay marriage must be allowed everywhere by simply requiring states to recognize same-sex marriages performed in other states." This indicates the Supreme Court might not base their final decision on what each state government suggests, but on what the public really believes since the time is shifting.

Patricia Smith wants to convince readers that gay-marriage should be allowed because people believe in different things now. One way she achieves her goal is by intentionally including a map of states that shows the number of states same-sex marriage is legal in. The map shows same-sex marriage is legal in 36 out of 50 states in 2015 comparing to 17 states out of 50 in 2014, which means more than half of the country accepts gay marriage. By doing this, the author is reminding the audience that a majority of people in the country has positive opinions or has shift opinions on gay marriage. Another way the author achieves her goal is by using titles like "Marriage for all?" and "Shifting Attitudes". This makes the reader think marriage has no true definition and is a right guaranteed for everyone, not matter if they are female or male. Therefore the author achieves her goal by using different crafts to convince readers what she thinks about the issue.

After reading this article, I think the Supreme Court should insist all 50 states to allow same-sex marriage. I think it is not up to others to say which gender people should marry because of some traditional beliefs. It is up to one to decide who they want to marry and remain together for the rest of their lives.

Girl In Translation

        Girl In Translation by Jean Kwok is about a young Chinese girl who just immigrated to the United States with her mother from Hong Kong and struggles to find her place in New York City. Kimberly and her mother immigrated to America along with the help of her aunt Paula, hoping to start a new life despite her dad's death. Yet, Kim begins to experience the brutality of the world around her, and learns that she can help herself only by working harder.
     
         While reading this text, I was thinking about the first social action inquiry question, what really difficult or complex things are happening in the text? Identity is a large issue that Kim struggles with. She's a normal schoolgirl at day, but a factory worker at nigh. For a while, Kim skipped school because she can't deal with the fact that she once was the best student in class back in Hong Kong, but now she can't even communicate with her teachers. Kim can't fit in at the factory where her mom works or at school where she once really enjoy.

        Another complex issue is child labor. Although it is illegal for children to work in factories because of the harsh environment, Kim is forced to work in order to improve her life. In addition to that, Kim's aunt, Aunt Paula would always find excuses to give them the lowest payment. This is because she takes advantage of Kim's mother's vulnerability. They made skirts for 1.5 cent cents each everyday. Kim worked as soon as she got to the factory after school and all day during breaks. She would do her homework on the way to the factory or at school to save time. Until she has the ability to earn money, Kim depends on the factory to live.

      In conclusion, Kimberly struggles with her responsibility and learns to move on in order to make her life better. Kimberly finds her own way to fit in and to fulfill her dreams.

Blog Revision

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In the book "Will Grayson, will grayson" , the authors John Green and David Levithan alternates between the diverse lives of two boys whose name is both Will Grayson and their meeting in a porn store. The first Will Grayson written by John Green, whose name is always capitalized throughout the book, goes on with his life by not caring much about anything because of his outgoing best friend, Tiny Cooper. The second will written by David Levithan whose written in lower case goes through his life on the other side of the town without much friends except an admirer and an online relationship with someone who goes by the name Isaac. Relationship is a theme incorporated by the writers into the book to teach readers lessons about life.

Whether it is friendship or love interests, family or peer acquaintances, relationship is a continuous theme throughout the book. For example, the first Will Grayson (written by John Green)  is depicted in the beginning as a guy who thinks relationships are unnecessary drama. Will thinks as long as he doesn't much about life, he get to live through it quietly. However, when he met Jane who he've always thought is lesbian but shes not, he realizes he need to be more assertive in his life. As a result, he decides to pursue Jane and finds that he enjoys having her in his life. In fact, he finds that her advice really helps him in all of his relationships. " W kiss. Her hands are freezing on my face, and she tastes like coffee and the smell of onion is still stuck to my nose, and my lips are all dry from the endless winter. And it's awesome."   Will finally learn to enjoy his life and actually caring for someone he loves. He learns that relationships are part of life and he has to accept that.

Another relationship portrayed in the book is between Will and his best friend Tiny Cooper. Tiny Cooper is depicted in the book as gay and Will is constantly being harassed being Tiny Cooper's best friend. People in school thought Will is also gay and begins to bully him about it. Will is embarrassed being Tiny Cooper's friend and being seen in public with him. But as Will's relationship with Jane advances, Jane's advice changes his mind. Will realizes Tiny Cooper is important and he needs him in his life. " Being in a relationship, that's something you chose. Being friends, that's something you are. But I do chose you. We've been friends too long  to pick, but if we could pick , I'd pick you."  Will realizes his relationship with Tiny Cooper is important and learn to accept Tiny for who he is.

In conclusion, the complicated relationships between characters can really teach readers different lessons about life. We have to accept people for being who they are and shouldn't try to change that. We have to live on life and always try harder to make life better. We can see the goal of the two authors and readers are able to relate better.

Blog Post

             In the article " Bagging Plastic" by Ian Lovett, the author wants us to know how many countries has take action to ban plastic shopping bags because of the environmental issues it causes. One thing the author does is by providing statistics that shows the number of plastic wastes. " In 2012, Americans generated about 32 million tons of plastic wastes, including shopping bags and beverage bottles, and recycled only about 9 percent of it, the Environmental Protection Agency says."
He also includes a list of major cities and countries-like the United States and San Francisco- that have bans on plastic shopping bags. These details help readers understand how serious the issue is and the actions that has been taken.
           
            The author hopes to persuade readers that plastic bags are harmful and should be banned, as well as to inspire readers to take action. One way he achieves his goal is by intentionally including pictures like a boy paddling through a plastic-strewn waterway and a turtle chewing on a plastic bag. The images tend to stir up emotions in readers' mind to feel bad for the poor animals and also people who live near plastic-strewn waterways. He also encourages readers to feel sorry for sea creatures by including subtitles like " Choking sea turtles&whales". This really tell readers how serious this problem is.

            The way the author have written about the issue showed me another side of it and kind of sifts my opinion. He makes me think plastic bags can influence all the living things on Earth and not just us. Plastic bags should be banned to reduce the number of problems on Earth.

The Secret Story of Sonia Rodriguez

          The book The Secret Life of Sonia Rodriguez by Alan Lawrence Sitomer is about the life of a Mexican-American girl who is stuck between the two different cultures. Sonia Rodriguez is the daughter of Mexican immigrants and even though Sonia was born in the United States, she can't resist the fact that she is Mexican and the stereotypes that follows. In the book, Sonia wants to become the first in her family to attend college but throughout the book, she faced many racism and stereotypes.
          First of all, a situation happens throughout the entire book which frustrates Sonia a lot and became one of her problems. Because that Sonia is a girl and the only daughter of her parents, she is expected to take care of the entire household even it meant dropping out of school. Sonia is constantly forced by her mother and aunt to cook, do chores and babysit her younger brothers. Despite the fact that Sonia needs to go to school for educational needs which she stresses a lot, her family still make her get up early in the morning to cook and do chores such as washing the clothes and cleaning the house. Then Sonia would arrive at school late and continue with her stressful schoolwork. However, even after she gets home, Sonia isn't able to do her homework until late at night when everyone is asleep and there is no one else to take care of. All this work is being Sonia is the only girl and daughter. She is expected to complete everything need to be done in the house. This is stereotype because females are always expected to stay home and do chores. No one would expect a girl to go to school and get an education.
          Another stereotype that occurs in the book is when Sonia appears in public with her twin brothers. Despite the fact that Sonia is still young, people consider her already a mother even though she didn't even finish high school yet. People expect her to become pregnant at a young age and drop out of school. The reason people would think this way is because Sonia is Mexican. Usually, people would consider Mexican women useless other than producing babies. This is a stereotype imprinted in their heads and hard to change,
         In conclusion, Sonia faces many hardships throughout the book such as stereotypes. But she manages to face them bravely and work hard to prove her value. She proves she is capable of graduating from high school and into college without becoming pregnant. This is important because she can prove herself without interfering in any violent actions.

Blog Review

             For this blog review, I read Megan's blog post on her independent reading book, The Girl With The Pearl Earring by Tracy Chevalier. The post is written really well and has a unique focus. She explains the struggles Griet faced throughout the book and connects her thinking to the story.

             I read this book before and I totally agree on Megan's points about Griet. Throughout the whole story, Griet faces different problems because of her poor family and her attraction to the 'new' family. The book constantly rotates around money and how much influence it can bring to people based on their ranking. Megan perfectly explains how because of money, Griet faces pressure from her family and also her guiltiness for not wanting to bring a better life to her family.  Just like what Megan said, the symbolism of 'my back' shows how Griet has to be loyal to only one family and not the other. 

           In Megan's post, money and power seems to be the problem for Griet. Because of poverty, Griet is forced to work for another family which led to an explosion of different problems. Griet has to decide whether to follow what she believe in or her family's wishes. Of course at the end, Griet choose to be loyal to her own family. I think money is really an influential issue. Because of money, people are willing to take chances and face destruction in their family. The Girl with the Pearl Earring is a good example of that. Money often forces people to take chances, good or bad. 

         Lastly, the structure of Megan's post is done well. It is done in a good sequence, with a brief but straight to the point summary and informative details to support her thoughts of the book. Megan's response is well written and inspires me as a reader of issues in the world.

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" Should The U.S & Canada Merge?"-- Non-Fiction Critical Analysis

In " Should The U.S & Canada Merge?" by Diane Francis, the author want to convince readers Canada should combine with America to become one massive country because of the cultural, economic and political benefits each country can bring to each other. One thing the author does is cite examples of the similarities Americans share with Canadians; for example, the two countries share the longest unprotected border which is about 5,525 miles long, the amount of tourists flowing over the border to visit, and favorite celebrities shared. She also includes the political advantages America can provide Canada. Because of the large amount of undeveloped resources and large amount of landmass Canada holds, China has targeted Canada for a long time. However, Canada's inability in protecting its huge landmass, America's 1.4 million people in the military can benefit Canada well. She also provides examples of how the two countries can benefit each other economically. She says, "In 2012, almost 74 percent of Canada's exports went to the U.S., and 19 percent of U.S. exports were sold to Canadians." This shows America is Canada's biggest customers and would benefit them the best. Lastly, the author shows the enormous amount of undeveloped resources in Canada can solve the dilemma of more than 9 million jobless Americans. By using these details, the author can persuade readers Canada and America match well together economically, politically and culturally.

Diane Francis hopes to persuade readers Canada and America should merge together to become the strongest and the most powerful nation on Earth. One way she achieves her goal is by intentionally including a list of Canadian celebrities that had appeared in popular American TV shows or movies. By doing it, she is constantly reminding readers that Canadians are among Americans and they are similar.  Another way the author achieves her goal is by bringing sympathy on Canada and making it sound helpless against China. "However, it is becoming more accurate to regard Canada as another province of China." This shows how Canada counts as one of China's property and China almost has full control over Canada. However, the author later brings in how the U.S can help "save" Canada. By doing this, the author makes the article more persuasive and convincing to readers.

After reading this article, I feel Canada and the U.S. shouldn't merge because it would bring a disadvantage to other nations. If the two nations combine, then it would become the biggest and the largest nation on Earth. The large amount of resources in Canada provides supplies to America's military and can make America stronger. What if one day the two nations started an attack on other nations, then no nation can survive.

The Child Called It

              The Child Called It is an astonishing and shocking memoir written by Dave Pelzer. Dave Pelzer wrote in gruesome details of the physical and emotional abuse his mother gave him throughout his childhood. Even though some question the authority of the book, it still brought attention to child abuse and the severe consequences of it. Throughout the book, child abuse is an ongoing issue and the cruelty is shown through Dave Pelzer’s perspective.

 In the book, Dave Pelzer reflects on his childhood and the abuse he received from his mentallyill mother. The ongoing abuse not only affects Dave physically, but also destroying his image of a mother. His father sense what was going on, but he decide to not acknowledge the issue and left Dave on his own. Dave lost the only help he can look forward to, but he never lose the hope that one day his mother would become well again and treat him like her son. The complex thing in the book is that even though Dave’s mother treated him like a “thing” instead of a human, Dave never lost the faith that one day his mother would heal and be nice to him. However, it is clear that his mother would never treat him well again in the book. His mother gave him rotten scraps that even dogs refuse to eat for meals, burned him on a gas stove, made him eat his own vomit and stabbed him so badly, Dave almost die. In conclusion, even though Dave never actually explain what cause his mother to do such actions, he never gave up despite the cruel treatments he received.

 Throughout the whole book, the story was told from Dave’s perspective. It make sense because it is his story to tell, but he also made what sounds gruesome and inhuman more a temporary issue his mother had. Despite how his mother treat him like a dog, Dave still treated her like his mother. Dave recall everything his mother had ever done to him in exact details, but at the end he always made up an excuse for her to convince himself to forgive him. In addition, the perspective the story is being told makes Dave sound helpless and also brave at the same time. 

In conclusion, Dave went through extreme conditions from his mother and continue to believe in his dreams. Child abuse in any form is cruel and damaging to children. Some may not be able to survive and continue their lives like Dave, so therefore child abuse is an issue that needs to be stopped. Victims should be relived from these nightmares and deserve what is best for them. 

Emil and Karl

            Emil and Karl is an astonishing novel about two boys growing up during World War II in Vienna. Only one of them, Emil is Jewish while the other Karl is a regular boy. Emil's father is displayed murdered by the Nazis while his mother went crazy with grief. Karl's parents are "dragged" away because they are socialists. Therefore, the boys are left behind with only each other. Throughout the whole story, the boys went through multiple complicated dilemmas and experience issues because of who they are. Jewish discrimination is a major issue in the book.
           In the book, Jewish discrimination is portrayed as a serious problem. Jews were trapped in Vienna and there are no where to go. Horrible incidents often happens in the book, " Jewish shops being looted, Jews forced to scrub Vienna's streets with their bare hands and to act like animals in a public zoo." Having their parents being taken away, the two boys have difficulty understanding why the Jews are treated so badly. They are even forced to face these humiliations from the authorities. This shows how severe discrimination is and one can be Together, they go through cruelty, courage, desperation and love. Kind people like Hans took the boys in and taught them how to pick the right choice based on their heart.
            However, the author doesn't include the perspectives of soldiers and civilians who hated Jews. The whole novel is written from the perspective of two boys, one that is Jew and one that is friends with Jews. Both boys are young, and have difficulty understanding how serious Jews being discriminated can be. Even though both of them faced separation with their families, because either they are Jews or have relationship with one. The chosen perspectives by the author shows how innocent Jew kids are during World War II and their innocence in doing nothing. The author first depicted the boys as best friends and all they want is to stay together. However, enemies continue to pick on them. Severe consequences came to those who are Jews or related.
            In conclusion, there are many conflicts evolving around Jewish discrimination. The discrimination fit in really well with the novel, because of the chosen time period. War is really horrible, especially when it can influence so many people. Innocent civilians are affected in many ways, either ending up in with a sad ending or dead.

Should YA Fiction Be Limited?

When books and novels were just written, attention-grabbing stories were carefully crafted by writers, who want to comfort and bring pleasure to readers. Yet, over the past years, books had transformed from calming and soothing to more profane and gruesome. Books like “The Absolutely True Diary of a Part-Time Indian” demonstrates many essential components of life, but also gives memorable lessons in harsher ways. As a result, many adult question these books and protest certain books should be banned from the book section read by their children. Yet, teens argue that young adult books are written for teens, and that parents should not take away their reading privileges.Therefore, access to YA fiction should not be limited because it is those, shocking books that provide teens experience with real-life situations, and also create a shield from the real world.

Even though YA fiction may contain some terrifying and gruesome materials that is inappropriate for teens, they shape teens’ point of views in a positive attitude and provide comfort to teens when dealing with stress from daily activity of living. The teens are facing extreme pressure and intensive problems daily in their disturbed lives. Books present a way out by writing about adolescents with similar situations. “ And there are millions of teens who read because they are sad and lonely and enraged. They read, because they believe, despite the callow protestations of certain adults, that books- especially the dark and dangerous ones will save them.” This quote shows how numerous young adults who are struggling through dark feelings can get comforted from YA books. YA fiction may be cruel, but it is the cruelty that support teens. “... the YA section of your local bookstore can be a pretty damn grim place, rife everything from angsty vampires to sex abuse to bullying. And no, not all of it is great literature.” Life is compose of virtuous and corrupted parts. Some teens may never experience the frightening part, but a lot would eventually have to face those experience in the end. YA books provide guidance for teens on how to deal with those unwanted situations better. The made-up characters bring examples for teens to learn better coping skills.

         Also, another reason why YA fiction should not be limited is that teens are surrounded with literature characters like the big, bad wolf, teens became more used to similar content. Teens has faced dark content in their lives, many since they were young. Adults fed them with tales about big, bad wolves and poisoned apple, while expecting them to stay innocent. So YA fiction is the upgraded version of those tales. “ But there’s something almost comical about raising them with tales if big bad wolves and poisoned apples, and then deciding at a certain point that literature is too ‘dark’ for them to handle.” Teen should not be treated like fragile, vulnerable people who need to be protected and shielded from everything horrible in the world. In his article refuting against Meghan Cox Gurdon, Sherman Alexie says, “ I write in blood because I remember what it felt like to bleed.” The tiny little details in those books is what teens experience in their life while growing up. Therefore, YA books provide teens with firsthand experience. Teens slowly build up with experience that will help them survive in the real world.

However, there are opponents who argues YA fiction has negative effects on teen readers, causing them to lose innocence too soon. In the article “ Darkness too Visible,” the author Meghan Cox Gurdon argues, “ self-destructive adolescent behaviors are observably infectious and have periods of vogue.” This shows how fast the darkness described in YA books can spread to readers. According to her, readers would hurt themselves because those books are too effective and powerful in spreading darkness. However, she does not acknowledge the fact that teens are already experiencing stressful things in real life. These dark and gruesome matters are already going on in their lives, teens are less likely going to hurt themselves after reading those books. Just like what Sherman Alexie says, “they wanted me to profess my love for God without considering that I was the child and grandchild of men and women who’d been sexually and physically abused by generations of clergy.” He reflects on how no one had consider the fact that he had already been through these things.

          In conclusion, YA fiction should not be limited in any way because YA books provide a comfort zone and help readers survive through tragic events in life. The cruelty of books help transform teens into more mature and understanding. They learn about life and how to survive through it bravely. In addition, YA books is a good way for teens to express their feelings. They can overcome internal fears with the help from YA books, and become more independent without seeking help from adults. Being able to achieve this would benefit teens in the future.

What I saw and How I Lied

              What I Saw and How I Lied by Judy Blundell is a novel about the life of a 15 year-old girl named Evie Spooner living in the period after WWII. She goes through many difficult stages of life with her beautiful mother, and the lack of a responsible father. Then, her mother met young Joe, and they soon fell in love, presenting Evie a real father. However, Joe left to enlist in the army, leaving Evie without a father again. When Joe comes back, all Evie hope is to have a normal life. But the war had left Joe with dark memories that makes him angry and irritated all the time. In the novel, the theme growing up is always presented in parts of Evie Spooner's life, which makes her to become more mature.
            In the beginning of the book, Evie and her best friend Margie Crotty is presented to readers trying on candy cigarettes and talking about wearing lipstick. All Evie wants is to grow up, to become her beautiful mother who catches the attention easily. Evie says in the book, "the way she held a cigarette, the way she danced in the kitchen, they way she could make supper with a cocktail glass in one hand-- that was movie star glamour. You could almost forget she was just a housewife from Queens."  Evie is jealous of her mother's beauty, and want to become her. But her mother, Beverly is overprotective. She claims she doesn't want Evie to grow up too soon, even though Evie is almost 16. At this point, Evie is still a child.
          When Joe return from the war, Evie thought they would finally return to normal life. So when Joe suddenly decide to take the family to Florida for vacation, she is thrill. They met the rich Graysons, and one day Evie decide to dress up fancy like Mrs.Graysons. When Mrs.Grayson found out, despite her mother's protest, she dressed up Evie into an outstanding woman. This is the first time Evie had experience growing up. And because Evie thought she is glamorous, she went to a dance where she met a movie-star gorgeous man named Peter Coleridge. The 21 year old named her "pussycat" and gave her attention she had never receive from a boy, let alone a man. 
         In addition, Evie also experience deciding what's right or wrong. When Peter acknowledge Evie about Joe stealing Jewish people's property during the war, she felt that is wrong and know something has to be done. Therefore after knowing the Graysons are jewish, she decides to take the money and return it. By doing this, Evie can decide the justice in the world, and finally achieve the goal of maturing.
         In conclusion, by going through the many events in one summer, Evie slowly mature from a girl to a young woman. Growing up is slowly built up by experience. Even though Evie depend heavily on her family, she learn to grow up and become independent. She discover the true her and know what is right.

Non-Fiction Critical Analysis

           In "Has Young adult fiction become too dark?" Mary Elizabeth Williams refutes against Meghan Cox Gurdon's argument and inform readers on how YA books provides a safer environment while also giving life experience through literature that can rip open some scars. One thing the author does is by including her own childhood experience with YA books, such as "Flowers in the Attic". She relates how not all teen readers do things described in the books. She also refute against Gurdon by suggesting she is the mother of two children and that she cares about the books her children read. But she says, "you can't compare what's crowding the shelves now with a tiny handful of classics that have endured." She then include opinions from young readers around the world, such as Emma and her own daughter. By doing all this, she shows how YA books may have change over the time, but teen readers enjoy reading about the characters, and to learn things that scared and fascinate us.

        Mary Elizabeth Williams wants to persuade readers that YA books provides good experience, and can feel things people deemed too inappropriate in the safety and comfort of literature. One way she achieves her purpose is by only including the perspectives of teens, for example, "good literature rips open all the private parts of us-and then they stitch it all back together again before we even realize they're not talking about us." She argues that good literature are meant to influence readers in ways without actually writing about them. She encourage readers to feel sympathetic toward herself, a mother who wants the best for her children. Also, she purposefully include the perspective of her daughter, because kids know what they want for themselves.
 
        The way Mary Elizabeth Williams have written about YA books changed my perspective. She made me think that YA books are good for teens and can actually help them in some way. By carefully picking certain quotes, she convinced me YA books heal the scars of troubled teens.

YA Reading Response

          Will Grayson, will grayson is a novel written by John Green and David Levithan, which alternates between the life of two boys named Will Grayson with completely different life. The first Will, whose name is always correctly capitalized, is described by living life without being noticed by following the rules of not caring much and shut up. Yet it becomes complicated because his best friend Tiny Cooper isn't the type to go around unnoticed.  Meanwhile, the lower-case will grayson written by David Levithan goes through his life without much friends except an online relationship with someone who goes by the name Isaac. Important themes and lessons in life are portrayed throughout the story for readers to relate better to the novel.

        One of the most important themes being portrayed is accepting who you are. In the story, Tiny Cooper is discriminated for being gay and because of his heavy body. However, throughout the book Tiny says he loves the fact that he's fat and that he is full of love. Also, Will Grayson finally throws out his rules with not caring much for accepting his love and appreciation toward Tiny Cooper and Jane. “We kiss. Her hands are freezing on my face, and she tastes like coffee and the smell of the onion is still stuck in my nose, and my lips are all dry from the endless winter. And it's awesome.” The other will grayson accepts himself being homosexual and allows Tiny into his love life. 

       Another theme interpreted in the book is relationships. Whether it is friendship or love interests, family or peer acquaintances, relationship is a continuing theme from the very beginning to the end. The book revolves around the friendship Will Grayson with his best friend Tiny Cooper, and also his love interest Jane. Even though Will Grayson is embarrassed to be friends and best friends with Tiny Cooper, who is gay. "Being in a relationship, that's something you choose. Being friends, that's just something you are. [But] I do pick you. We've been friends too long to pick, but if we could pick, I'd pick you.” He realized how important how much his friendship means. The other will grayson focused on his love interest with Isaac and Tiny Cooper, but also with his mother.

     In conclusion, John Green and David Levithan included themes in the novel in order to teach reader lessons through the story of different characters. These are important life lessons some might find hard to learn, but actually matters a lot. The book deals with different issues that happens in life which helps readers relate better to the book.

Baseline Essay: Guess who's Looking at your Facebook Page?

         In the article, "Guess Who's Looking at Your Facebook Page?" the author Alessandra Potenza raised concern to the issue of whether should school admission officers and employers Google applicants for background checks. More and more college admission officers are checking applicants' online trails, claimed wanting to know more about applicants. Statistics and examples of applicants reveal the consequences for posting online. The article reflect on how students/workers' privacy and outside lives are being invaded without permission.

        According to the article, "Guess Who's Looking at Your Facebook Page?" college admission officers has started conducting background checks on applicants since 2011. Background checks include googling applicants online, and investigating them on social media sites like Facebook, Twitter and Instagram. Yet many young people share personal information and post parts of their life online. "In a recent survey, over a quarter of admissions officers at hundreds of top ranked U.S colleges said they'd used Facebook and Google to vet applicants." A background check means invasion of privacy toward applicants. Officers conducting unreasonable searches on students' private life is just not ethical.

       Not only school admission officers are checking students online trails, many employers are also searching on workers in order to make sure they are behaving properly. In the job market, checking on applicants on social media appears to be spreading. According to the article, " more than 90 percent of recruiters check candidates' social media profiles." This means workers are technically not allowed to have fun because they are being restricted. Workers has to behave on a  professionally
manner to present themselves better to employers. Therefore in order to get a job or obtain their jobs, workers are forced to conceal themselves.

    However, the author also provides a counterclaim. College admission officers and employers claim they are only checking how responsible their students and workers are behaving. "...even "friends" her students on Facebook to check- beyond the privacy wall- that they're behaving responsibly." Even though it is okay for counselors to make sure students are behaving properly, it is not their business to check beyond the privacy wall.

    In conclusion, students and workers privacy and fun should not be invaded by college officers and employers, People should be allowed to maintain their own private life while doing school work or regular work. It is not their business of others life.

The Faithful Elephants

  The Faithful elephants written by Yukio Tsuchiya is a heartbreaking story of three elephants residing in a zoo during a war in Japan. Zookeepers are ordered by the army to execute the poor animals inhabiting inside the zoo. However, the zookeepers considered the animals and the three elephants as their own children, and the unfortunate sacrifice of them shows the cruelty of the past and war. The author of the Faithful Elephants established multiple different setting descriptions to reflect on the emotional feeling of the story, and to create contrasts between emotions displayed throughout settings so readers can understand the story better.

              The author of the Faithful Elephants immerses readers "gently" into the story. The lighthearted description of the Ueno Zoo provides a peaceful setting for readers as they slowly settle into the story. For instance, the author describes, "the cherry blossoms are in full bloom at the Ueno Zoo. Their petals are falling in the soft breeze and sparking in the sun." The image portrayed a beautiful and loving place which everyone enjoys.  Also, the cherry blossoms fully depicted the symptoms of spring, which represents rebirth. 
    
               Another example of how the author uses setting descriptions to reflect on the emotional feelings is when she zooms into the war. The war is the cause of the conflict, and therefore a close description of it shows how frightening and scary it is. " Bombs were dropped on Tokyo every day and night, like falling rain." The author creates a violent scene which is a huge contrast from the image created before.
        
               Lastly, the lonely image presented at the end adds on to the description before. " He was still patting the tombstone tenderly as the cherry blossoms fell on the grave, like snowflakes." This image brings a chill as the story ends. The author is like reminding readers to remember the sacrifice of the three elephants. Also, the falling cherry blossoms are like telling the elephants to rest in peace which brings a sadness to it.

               In conclusion, Yukio Tsuchiya presents different emotions in parts of the story to show the difference in settings by creating contrasts. She uses gentle and peaceful wordings to introduce readers into the story while using violence and frightening images to show the climax of it.  As a reader, I feel I can read better into the story, and analyze better about it by using the descriptions. A excellent writing piece with detailed descriptions can always insert readers right into the story.

No Man's Land

    
 No Man's Land
    By: S.T. Underdahl

       Dov Howard is a sixteen years old emo-kid who lives under the shadow of his brother. Dov also absorbs the problem of his emo friends, staying against bullies, and issues teens face. Dov Howard is living under constant pressure from his family who compares him to his outstanding brother, Brian. Even after Brian joins the war in Afghanistan, Dov's family continue to pay their attention to news in the Middle East. However, when Brian returned from Afghanistan unharmed, Dov thought finally there's someone who "cares" about him. Little does he know, Brian is suffering from PTSD. Bit by bit, Brian reveal symptoms of PTSD, drinking, sleeping disturbance, and becoming depress.  When Dov finally realize what his brother is suffering from, he tries to warn his parents and friends about the ugly truth. This shows the care and love Dov have for Brian, no matter what Brian try to do to him.